Wednesday, April 25, 2007

critique - 5/3 vox

This week, I've been working on the 5.3 cover for VOX this week. I had originally thought domestic violence was the main subject of the story so my concept for the cover was to show a somewhat somber scene with an obscured outline of a woman. Gray and red were the colors I thought would best show the gravity of the subject. The typeface is fittingly called "head injuries" but I think it looks more "blood and gore" than grave.




After many revisions, below is the final (at least for now) design for my website splash page. I'm concerned about my name and the way it looks. I can't decide if it would look better to have them separated or together plus I'm having typeface issues.

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